The basic narrative of this story was about the only thing that kept me reading to the end. I wanted to know what happened to the characters in the end – but even then I was disappointed.
The presentation and style was disappointing, and at times disjointed. There were points during the narrative that I couldn’t be sure just where I was in the developing storyline. And there were, very obviously, just one too many convenient developments, each of which deflated the tension of the narrative a little bit more.